Monday, February 23, 2015

Create52: #8 -- Good Enough

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My last two Create52 posts have touched on the two poles of creativity -- in-the-moment improvisation, and dedicated editing and refining of a piece to make it the best it can be.

Sometimes there's a need for something in the middle. Restrictions of time, energy, materials, or whatever may force the creative effort to end at a point where it's just "good enough".

You may have a piece where you're not going for off-the-cuff improvisation, but you just don't get the opportunity to make all the changes and refinements you'd like -- you're finally forced to slap some duct tape around it and hit the road, hoping it all holds together.

This week, that's where I'm at.

But first, let me refresh you on what the whole point of this 'Create52' thing is: This is number eight of what I hope is a year-long series of 52 posts under my self-imposed 2105 blogging initiative -- to create something new and share it here on my blog each and every Monday.

If you'd like, you can get a little more background about my Create52 goal HERE, in my first Create52 post of 2015.

Now back to that thought of "good enough:"

Due to a hectic past few weeks, I have not be able to get as much creative work done as I would like.  I 've managed to do some editing of an earlier story in preparation of its submission, but little else. No time for messing around making music and not much time to do any new writing.

So this week, my Create52 is only a couple of things that, even combined, barely make it as "substantial" enough to meet my third Create52 guideline. And in both cases, I'd maybe prefer to edit them some more, but one has already been posted, and the other one I just haven't had the time to do.

Both will have to be good enough.


Good Enough #1: He Talks With His Hands


I've written 50-Word Stories for quite a while and really enjoy that format. You can look back through my older Create52 posts and also the "My Writing" tab to see some examples.

The other day, I happened to stumble on a similar but slightly larger format -- the 100-word story.  HERE's the website that I found (100wordstory.org).

I haven't formally submitted anything to the site, but I did notice that in addition to accepting submissions, they also offer an open monthly photo prompt where you simply reply with a story in the comments. 

So I gave it a try. The photo they had up for February is to the right, and I tried to create a 100-word story based on that image of hands.

Since those are a man's hands I ended up with a story from the female POV. I think it turned out OK, and I did actually take some time to edit and refine it, but in the end, I also wanted to get at least something 'completed' to share for my Create52 post. 

So I called this story "good enough" and submitted it.  see what you think -- I call it "He Talks With His Hands:"

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He talks with his hands.

 

He talks with his hands.

His expressive fingers dance in the air, accentuating each spoken syllable with frills of motion.

He’s done it as long as I’ve known him, from his waving gesture when he first approached me in the college library, to him wringing his hands this morning when he said we needed to talk.

His fluttering hands remind me of a baton-free musical maestro, bringing forth each note from a devoted orchestra, or perhaps a powerful wizard generating potent magic out of thin air.

It’s fascinating to watch.

But it doesn’t ease the pain of his underhanded betrayal.


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Good Enough #2: The Special Affair


But also speaking of 50-Word stories, I've been working on a couple of them lately, and want to submit one for February to Tim's FiftyWordStories site.

But while I have a few "finished," none of them strike me as quite "submittable" as they stand.  I still need to tweak and edit a bit to get them to that state.

But I also want to share one here.

So I'm offering one that is "good enough" -- again, mainly because I don't have any more time to improve it before sharing.  I call it "The Special Affair."

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The Special Affair 


I struggle to fasten my pants. The suit fit perfectly at my wedding, but that was years ago.

I hope my date doesn't mind.

I peek into her room. Giggling, she rushes to me in a swirl of pink lace.

"I'm ready for the Daddy - Daughter dance," she squeals.


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Well, there you go -- two Create52 offerings that aren't quite what I'd call "edited to perfection," but hopefully are still "good enough."

Do you think "good enough" is acceptable?  If deadlines or other reasons force you to reach a point where you simply can't edit any further, are you satisfied with "good enough," or do you choose to go for "not at all?"

Thank you so much for visiting! See you next Monday for another post in my Create52 series!

15 comments:

  1. That first one had a sad twist. Nothing those hands can do now to fix that.

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    1. Thank you, Alex! And yeah -- that was exactly the sense I was going for in that first story.

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  2. I'm leaning towards the first one...but they're both captivating. :)

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    1. Thank you Don! I really appreciate your kind words!

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  3. Yeah, both were pretty good, GgC.

    Kudos to the Dad who was at least still able to get the pants to fasten for his daughter's wedding. I have some jeans from years ago and they ain't gonna fasten around my waist ever again.

    >>... If deadlines or other reasons force you to reach a point where you simply can't edit any further, are you satisfied with "good enough," or do you choose to go for "not at all?"

    Well, since I gave up on the writing years ago (except for blog bits), "not at all" is my permanent status.

    ~ D-FensDogg
    'Loyal American Underground'

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    1. Thanks, StMc! I like that you got "daughter's wedding" out of the piece. IT makes perfect sense. But as I wrote it, I was actually picturing the daughter as about 7 or 8 and going to a a special 'Daddy-Daughter' dance event.

      And as long as you're still breathing, you can always turn a "not at all" stop into just a "stopped for a while" pause. Ain't nothin' wrong with restarting... ;)

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    2. Chris (9 out of 10 times that I type your name, my fingers automatically add a "T" to the end, which I must then backspace to and delete. Don't let that go to your head, buddy. : ) ~

      I realized years ago that I simply don't have the talent to write professionally. As Mark Twain observed, "sawing wood is what" I "was intended for". But thanks for the encouragement all the same, Brother.

      ~ D-FensDogg
      'Loyal American Underground'

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  4. The second one is more appealing to me; it made me smile and I believe that writing should evoke some sort of emotion from the reader at all times.

    Bingo!

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    1. Thank you very much, Cherdo -- I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

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  5. Great job, Chris. This short writing is so hard and you handle it beautifully.

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    1. Thank you, Lee! I appreciate you saying that.

      I enjoy the challenge of squeezing a 'story' into 50 words. Each word has to work to contribute to the story, so it helps pare my natural long-windedness down. :)

      And it turns out that I was wrong in my previous post in saying my 50-Word Story "No Imagination" had not been accepted. Tim contacted me yesterday and it's actually up at FiftyWordStories.com today. :)

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  6. I do enjoy your writing. I don't know how you are able to convey so much in so few words, THAT is definitely way beyond me. I thought 'The Special Affair' was especially touching.

    Great job, keep 'em coming!

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  7. Both of your "good enough" efforts work very well for me. I tend to stay in zone good enough since I don't like spending too much time on perfection that I'd never attain. You're good with the 50 word format. I'm afraid I'm a bit too loquacious to pull those off well.

    Arlee Bird
    A to Z Challenge Co-host
    Tossing It Out

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  8. Chris, I enjoyed them both, and may give this a try too. Even though the first speaks of betrayal, your presentation makes it dance... just as delightfully as that small girl in pink lace!

    Have a great weekend (smile).

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  9. I really enjoyed the first one. The second took me a minute. Might be clearer if you changed the little girl's line to "I'm ready for the dance, Daddy." That sounds more little girl to me and anyone with a daughter would hear the unspoken "Father-Daughter Dance".

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Don't be shy -- feel free to comment. I really appreciate your thoughts.